I have create a cohesive reading experience for my audience by not using interviews for this paper. but an autoethnography because of this circumstance. because i can be a very blunt person at time I used that in my paper in order to draw the attention to my readers. The more interesting the paper is with alot of facts the more interesting you paper could be.
the changes that i needed to make was add another section about how society played a role in the choices that my brother made over the past couple years. at this point i’m not really sure where my paper stands but i do need to get my paper to the writing center in order to get checked.
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