The most important feedback on my paper was actually not the corrections that doug placed on my paper. It was the good feedback that i received. The reason why is because for a while i actually believed that my paper was not fully correct and most of the time I actually wanted to just erase everything that I had just wrote and retype my entire paper. But, hearing the feed back from peer review it wasn’t as bad as I thought it was. It was helped because it actually gave me more motivation to continue writing and fully finish my paper the best that I could.
The most difficult part during my darfting process was just finding more articles that related to my paper. because I did not want to have to much but then I also did not want to have to little. But revising it wasnt all that bad as I thought he would be as well. The reason why is beacuse after going to the writing center and talking to them about my paper. there was not much that was needed to be revised. It’s actually good to hear good feedback on your paper from a person who doesn’t know your life until they read your story.
My research paper shows my best ability as a writing would be citing sources and referring them back to a particular time and my life. basically relating the two together having something to back up my own experience.
